digital art help - uni

[Popeye]

I have to do a self portrait, this is what i have so far.

What can i do to make it better?

[John Kleppe]

Personally I'd sharpen the hair line over your forehead a little bit.

Edit: looking closer I think the issue is that tapestry style layer you added in is causing the problem. I assume you wanted the feel of the tapestry but I would still try and sharpen some of the edges.

Edited November 3, 2011 by John Kleppe

[Hess]

move past the halloween theme, its november

[John Kleppe]

move past the halloween theme, its november

[Popeye]

Personally I'd sharpen the hair line over your forehead a little bit.

Edit: looking closer I think the issue is that tapestry style layer you added in is causing the problem. I assume you wanted the feel of the tapestry but I would still try and sharpen some of the edges.

I see what you mean, i tried it and it does look better. but I had to redo everything, like a noob i added a filter which inturn made sharpening it blurry, lol

Edited November 3, 2011 by Popeye