Write something epic

[Astraeus G]

I was working on my english essay last week and I was sitting on my table thinking as i listened to music. Then out of random i wrote a poem lol

( dont worry i finished my essay and got an A)

You think we're the same

but we're not cause if we were, we would share the same brain

Now ur shocked and cant explain the coldness in the rain

My mind is trained to look the other way from those who betray

And to only care for the ones who show love everyday

You'll never catch me slippin no matter how much you pray

Instead, i'll be climbing that ladder

Until i'm up, up, and away.

What do you think?

Also write something yourself. Get creative!

Edited October 13, 2012 by Stuntin Plk

[Jizzlemastyx]

something epic. I have a lack of creativity. Sorry

[Doc]

bitches aint shit but hoes n tricks

[India777]

wiki wiki worddddddd

[Ethan]

That's pretty good, Stuntin. I easily found the rhythm and beat .

I'm no lyricist. I'd rather sit behind the soundboard /drool.

[The Zane]

Pretty good

But yeah I can't write a poem for shit

[Zeldagamer13]

Give me time, and i'll come up with something. Nice job

[Ceejus Christ]

2 separate old ones I found.

Drunk by night, the early man is

Much like how the modern man says

Impressed by honest origin

disgust in contradictive sin

Valiant in his own mind

Ought to be in his own time

Smite to thee who brains be lite

Delight is Death taking sight

Passive and quiet the early man is

Stupid and loud the modern sperm stays.

Annoy and toy with my own mind

Leave me alone with my own kind

False I seem from your own bind

Judgementality, is one of many lives

Now, please tell me, one of your lies.

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I'ts a miserable life living as a miser,

but it pays to save early starting at a minor.

Social minority is only a hate for the majority,

differentiation is the only answer to a variety.

Taboo clicks, only divide and demise,

according to definitions of closed minds and blind eyes.

Unseen acts of valor are to be shadowed by declared acts of sin,

labeled purely out of Christ's bias perception.

Thinking, a constant difficulty when backseat driver's assume the role of highs,

a child of God is one of the preacher's many lies.

Conditioned by experiencing hell's before heavens,

wait scratch that, I mean fears before emotions.

[Astraeus G]

That's pretty good, Stuntin. I easily found the rhythm and beat .I'm no lyricist. I'd rather sit behind the soundboard /drool.

Thank you

Pretty good But yeah I can't write a poem for shit

It's not that hard. Give it a try and you'll be surprised with what you can come up with.

Give me time, and i'll come up with something. Nice job

Alright

2 separate old ones I found.

Drunk by night, the early man is

Much like how the modern man says

Impressed by honest origin

disgust in contradictive sin

Valiant in his own mind

Ought to be in his own time

Smite to thee who brains be lite

Delight is Death taking sight

Passive and quiet the early man is

Stupid and loud the modern sperm stays.

Annoy and toy with my own mind

Leave me alone with my own kind

False I seem from your own bind

Judgementality, is one of many lives

Now, please tell me, one of your lies.

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I'ts a miserable life living as a miser,

but it pays to save early starting at a minor.

Social minority is only a hate for the majority,

differentiation is the only answer to a variety.

Taboo clicks, only divide and demise,

according to definitions of closed minds and blind eyes.

Unseen acts of valor are to be shadowed by declared acts of sin,

labeled purely out of Christ's bias perception.

Thinking, a constant difficulty when backseat driver's assume the role of highs,

a child of God is one of the preacher's many lies.

Conditioned by experiencing hell's before heavens,

wait scratch that, I mean fears before emotions.

Very nice

If you have more post them

Edited October 13, 2012 by Stuntin Plk